My Dream

by CritiX   Sep 28, 2005


Hopes and fears
Whispering dreams
Fallen tears
Nothing what it seems

Moving clouds
A rising sun
People pass me by
Not one glare at me none

Wondering where I am
Thoughts erased
No more time
Its such a waste

Kill me softly
With words unheard
Wish I could fly away
Just like a bird

Footsteps erased
Disappearing so fast
Endless walking
Why cant I rest

Maybe this is hell
Everlasting pain
Perhaps heaven
Its all the same

Cant wake up
Guess its not a dream
This is my life
Nothing what it seems

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  • 18 years ago

    by CritiX

    Thanks all for at least reading my poems and in some cases thanks for commenting..

    This is and will be my last poem here on Poems-and-Quotes. In a few days from now I will kill myself leaving this pathetic world.. Thanks for those that stood by me.. Cya in another lifetime maybe

  • 18 years ago

    by Kurt

    Another good poem. These are really good. I'm still shocked that no one has read these. I must tell my friends to read these. Anywayz great poem.

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