The end

by Liz Suffecool   Sep 29, 2005


I put a blade across my wrist
shiver slightly with fear in the presence of nobody in a tearful hind of mist

I think about my friends and then about my boyfriend
I think over is this just another stress reliever or is this going to be the end

I hope for the end cross my fingers as I cut
Why do I want to die again? I scream whats do i have to live for WHAT?

I think about it carefully as my blood drips to the floor
What do I have to live for?

My friends are just a myth they never really liked me
and My love, well thats just a fantasy

My parents are pushy and dont really seem to care
all this people make me wonder why I continue to want to be there

Well I guess this is it I guess this is good-bye
I guess you now all know the real me and from the world I can no longer hide

**** Dont worry Im just upset I havent cut or anything I havent in a while. I was kinda writing from a different point of view I dont really like it but Im just happy when i can write now

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  • 18 years ago

    by [crimson] tearz_fall

    Hey hunnie. wow this is a really good one, i like it alot. It puts together all the emotions i have in side into one simple poem.But at the same time it kind of makes me angery, and it makes me understand why people think cuting is stupid. Its because of people like you. liz, YOU DON'T CUT. Yes one time you took a safty pin and sctartched your wrist. Thats why people that think that the people that cut do it for attention. Yes your good at writting pooetry about it, but if i didn't know you i would think that you were a seriouse suicidle cutter. And you shouldn't tell peple those things, like that you cut befor. Cuz I really don't count that lil scratch as cutting. And im not trying to be mean or harsh, but I do cut, and Im not proud of it, and when you go around telling people that you "used to cut" it makes me think that you feel its a joke or something. I dunno maybe im taking this outta proportion but this is how I feel and its been bottled up inside for a while. ~*~brina~*~

  • 18 years ago

    by BrokenMisery

    Interesting Piece. I'm not a great fan of the style because the meter was weird and i hate 3 line stanzas because they don't seem to flow very well but that's personal feeling. My main problem with this is how often this sort of thing has been written. It seems very average and has unoriginal ideas within it. It wasn't too badly written in technique and its good that it relieves you emotions.
    Keep it up and step out of the box.
    Peace.

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