Written_In_Blood (part two)

by Kurt   Sep 29, 2005


You eased away the pain
Took away the burn
But I tried in vain
I guess i'll never learn

You said you loved me
How could you have lied
Why isn't love free?
Why is it i want to die?

When you turned to leave
You know i cried
You never believed
How much i tried

Each breath i took
Each tear that fell
My chest shook
Masked it so no one could tell

I acted strong
In front of you
Holding on
So scared of truth

Tonight feelings flow
The paper drips
I think you know
Why theres blood on my lips

I left my heart broken
Burning inside my soul
My words of love unspoken
And i watched you go

He holds you close
Your love he holds
Thats how life goes
Thats how my life unfolds

I wrote this due to many of my peers asking for a part two. Please rate and comment, I like to return the favor.

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  • 18 years ago

    by forgettingyoumiserably

    First of all, that was fabulous. i loved it. and i shall read all the rest of your stuff, but tonight i must bid my puter adu, because my i cant be one TOO late. heehee *winks*. and thankyou for the comment. it boosted my confidence like 5 levels. i pressed some button by accident and then it went away, and then it came back. it said i praised your comment. that sounds a little arrogant, but whatever. your comment has officially been praised. toodles.

  • 18 years ago

    by Dark Angel

    I lovers it! And now I wanna cry.. again..
    Love sucks ass.. the relationship never lasts..
    *sigh*

    XoXo,
    Fallen Dark Angel

  • 18 years ago

    by emile

    Hi, thanks for your comment, i accept your thoughts, although I don't really appreciate them, And I was just wondering where I made a mistake? Just out of curiosity
    thanks
    emile xox

  • 18 years ago

    by **dare~2~breathe**

    I really like both of these poems. Theyr full of meaning ad emotion, they flow with such ease.. brilliant write.. keep it up xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Solace

    Both parts are just amazing. I love the wording and the flow. two thumbs up. xx:

    *> : PainOfOne

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