Believe

Awwww!! nice peom. well written. one of my fav poets ;) Rosie xXx

Very nicely written. 5/5 none to less.
Keep writing and take care [always]

xx:

*> : PainOfOne

There’re some things
we cant seem to forget,
well remember;
we cant seem to let go,
well hold on to it;
we cant seem to complete,
well strive to fulfill;
we cant seem to accept,
well comprehend;
we cant seem to deny,
In miracle, love and heaven.
There’re some things well believe.

XD I dunno.. Maybe like that... But i'm not great with poems.. hehe.. But that's what kinda I would change.. I dunno again I really do love the poem.... Keep it up XD Take Care

I like your style, and yes we should belive in miracles, love and heaven..also in God...great poem...stay strong in faith

-angel-

Hey this was really good... Might wanna think about leaving out There're some things.. Makes it more dramatic XD... Anywho.. It was great..Keep it up.. Thanks for the very nice comments ^^ Take Care...