Comments : Butterfly

  • 13 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    Omg this is so sad i love the last 2 stanza's...but htere is one thing i dont understand...in the second to last stanza you have a number 3...is that supposed to be there? and if it is....wtf does it mean lol 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Dave

    Man i wish i could write a love poem guess i just dont have the knack .... but im real glad u can and your dang good at it too big 5 for you my friend thanks for shareing

  • 13 years ago

    by squirttt

    Wow. great job with the construction of the voice in which the feeling conveys. this is a beautiful piece of writing. i can relate to the feelings and emotions. a great writer is one who can relate to their audience with just a simple voice of mind. keep up the great work and keep writing. 5 for you!

  • 13 years ago

    by Justin

    I liked it, i think you did a good job, but what the first person said.. is that 3 suppose to be in there, if it is, it doesn't make sense, but the rest of it was really good and had a nice flow and didn't need to rhyme for it to be good, you did a good job, 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Shy

    Very very good 5/5 i like this alot

  • 13 years ago

    by kishi tenshi

    Hmmm... ur good... like it.... keep up...

  • 13 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Good job, Keep it up. Just a couple things
    Threw~ should be through
    and you could still work on the flow and be less repetitve. Hope these tips help you

  • 13 years ago

    by last_petal

    Hi i am a new member in this website and u know i really like it... Keep up the good work... Ans can u also read some of my poems and rate them

  • 13 years ago

    by shawn hoskins

    Very good once again that was a great poem 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Kit Kat Katie

    This is good, but there are points where it also isn't. I think you need to work on form a little more, and it will be better, but the relations are good.. Keep it up!!

    Love Always,
    Katie Schettler

  • 13 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Good poem, I love it. ^__^ Keep up the good work hun.

    xoxMeg.

    PS: Thanks for your comment on my poem.

  • 13 years ago

    by Jenn

    Nice work hun keep it up

  • 13 years ago

    by Jenn

    Nice work hun keep it up

  • Nice poem.
    Love the title, lol !!
    You've written this well, i like the ideas behind it, it reads well aswell.
    5/5

    Thanks for your comments, i really appreciate them.

    xxx cici xxx

  • 13 years ago

    by cristina

    Hey well u have a very good way of expessing ur fellings i give u a 5/5:)

  • 13 years ago

    by k i k i

    Beautiful :) xx

  • 13 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Its amaxzing, very very good.
    keep it up.
    Tara-Kay xxx

  • 13 years ago

    by AlexJ

    Wow! That was really deep and emotional. I liked it very much especially the end!! Good job!

  • 13 years ago

    by Jerry Scott

    You have a unique writting style. I like this poem. 5+++

  • 13 years ago

    by xX-jess-Xx

    I agree with jerry lol ur writing style is very unique, and thats great! jesx