Raven

by LadyPearl   Oct 1, 2005


Silent winds, the Raven flies
Dark of night his silent cry
sweeping nations, conquering lands
In Nature's great protective hands

Black and luscious it's noble wings
feathers of night, brilliantly rings
taste the air so sweet and calm
upon Nature's star laid palm

Soar on clouds of secret dark
Ravens land on their mark
To their homes and tender trees
A warmth alive deep in me

Fly great raven, feathers gleam
fly into the night of dreams
shatter the silence, curdling calls
Soar to many lands afar

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  • 19 years ago

    by charles

    Your poem was good except i am not to sure about your choice of descriptive language it seems most poems fail because of that ingredient even though your subject matter was good

  • 20 years ago

    by Jason Meres

    Splendidly done. Two suggestions. Third stanza, second line, I might suggest "upon" instead of simply "on"
    And the final two lines are the only ones that don't rhyme, which throws me off. Now for the good stuff. I love your imagery in this, truly brilliant along with your word choice. Well done.

  • 20 years ago

    by Jamie

    Great poem choppy in a few areas but other then that this is really good your a very talented person

  • 20 years ago

    by Atomic

    I like who you describe everything with so much details.

    Might I add, it's a wonderful topic.

    No complaints here.

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • 20 years ago

    by XxTeArSxX17

    Amazing job nice floe love that the most keep it up 5.5

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