I think this fantasy poem. =)

I can relate because...well....I think of the same thing, but no matter how hard one wishes for it, wishing isn't enough. Take matter into your own hands and work for what you believe in.

My favourite lines were practically the whole poem.

( )_( )
(='.'=)
(")-(") Arrivederci!

This is such an innocent & beutifully written poem... i wish all the world would want to make it to this place....
the world would be so much better
good job
5/5 of course !
love
amy

Interesting concept. i really like it. it would be so much easier if the world were like this.
anyways, it was a great poem! keep writing!
crystal

I loved it! especially the ending.
i want that kind of world too

I want a world like tht and i do have one in my head. If only it were real....

Great Poem!!!!

~aMy~

Too bad we dont have that....well thats why we got walgreens! lol ya ok well i didtn understand this part...Or like it let it seem......wut does that mean? i reread it so many times! 5/5 n/e way

Oh . I like this poem it's so good . yea I think everyone wishes we had this at sometime.
Anyway keep it up your poems are good.
~April~

Kooooooool....lol, im a man of few words.

Matt

Wow. this one blew me away. i've felt like that so many times...it's nice to know that there is somebody else who understands. thank you.....keep writing.

Hey i luved dis poem...great work..gave it a 5/5...luv dia

This poem was really good. I can relate to it a lot! I really loved the last part. Great job 5/5

I liked it a bunch tyler! keep the good poems up, dude.

AWSOME WRITING U HAVE A TALENT FOR THIS! (srry for caps)

AWSOME WRITING U HAVE A TALENT FOR THIS! (srry for caps)

Nice poem.

It really basically appeals and relates to everyone.

(Niice)

Sounds like paradise....almost. u forgot the most important thing of all: No pain