Blood Rain

by KitchBlood   Oct 3, 2005


I cry so many tears,
to try to put out the flame,
thats eating away at my heart,
and you know whos to blame.
Hes in the wind,
in all the breath I take,
at every thought,
I feel as I could break.

Let the rain fall,
you wont see me cry,
the clouds will hide my sorrow.
Dusk falls,
and shadows come to
save me from tomorrow.

Ler the clouds clear away,
you still wont see my pain,
too blinded by the light,
you cant see my dark,
where no moonlight comes,
no one finds my heart,
it has been stolen.

Let the rain fall,
you wont see me cry,
the clouds will hide my sorrow.
Dusk falls,
and shadows come to
save me from tomorrow.

Tomorrow comes,
tomorrow goes,
and I'll lay here to bleed.

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  • 18 years ago

    by KitchBlood

    Thanks everyone, and yeah, still bleeding (not literally)

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Hey, it's nice, AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!! Love it, you know this poem reminds me of the song crying in the rain...and hey...are you still bleeding?

  • 18 years ago

    by Illusion

    Wow, very artistic. I can relate in so many ways. I love standing in the rain when I cry, it hides all of my tears and pain.

    You did a very good job writing this, it's a very emotional piece. Great Job!

    DFK