Well i like it for its unusual type of flow and for the odd truth that it speaks

I enjoyed this poem, as it is not held back by a set rhyming scheme which gives it an ability to flow well and portray each feeling and opinion very well, I really enjoyed this, it was a good poem, well done and take care
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It speaks the truth...its a nice poem.. nice unique flow..
liked it a lot
5/5 cuz its worth it !! : )
amy

Nice job. it was a lovley write keep the gopod work love the first part

I think you have captured the primary motive of most writers I love it

I'm glad Im not the only one who goes to poetry for relief.

I especially line thesecouple of lines:

"How pathetic is it
That I sit with emotion?
And instead of facing
My firing pain
I write it down
And wish it away. "

I don't see it as pathetic, I just see it was ...healthy. =)

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(='.'=)
(")-(") Arrivederci!

I try to put things in poetry format too, if I dont let it out in my writing, I'll let it out on myself, cause theres no one else, and that could get ugly.

Not pathetic at all! and your so talented, great poem i loved this idea your so smart!!

I love this! It's so very true..
I especially like the last stanza.. although the rest was pretty fantastic, too! I've never read anything like this... Keep it up!
Sarah-Joy

This had a great meaning behind it. The last stanza really brought the poem together I think. And the flow was good. And I also liked the way you opened up the poem. Thought it was great. Awesome write! 5/5

`Taleee xx

Wow...i loved that, its so true!

much love,

Steph

It was beautiful..very inspiring..I really liked it, and it definitely made me smile!! 5/5

Because there was no set rhyme, it gave it more way to flow where it wanted to go.
Don't write for acceptance
For forgiveness and pity
[I would say this, and I agree with it, but to me it would mean reading a poem by a writer who would say something like, "I do this because nobody likes me." etc. I loved the word choice of the two sentences.]
Speak for these things
You seek in your dreams.
[Normally I hate people writing dreams because it's becoming too cliche but this fit well.]
Your whole poem was good especially having long then short lines to give a reader the pause needed.

This Is a Message That Every Poet On This Site Needs To Be Paying Attention To...This Poem Should Be Brought To Everyones Attention...I Feel Like Writing Should Be For You & You Only...If Its To Impress The Eyes Of Others Than Lay Down Your Pen Because You Can Never Be Called a True Poet...Just An Imitator Of Everyone Else's Appetite For Poetry 5/5
This Was Well Expressed
xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

"Don't write for acceptance
For forgiveness and pity
Speak for these things
You seek in your dreams. "

I LOVED those line, this poem has a really strong message and I loved it! It's something i bet alot of people can relate with. Great work.

--Steph

I agree with Nikki. Poetry to me, is a way to express yourself. Some people on here say things like "you could have done better" or "the rythym was off" when in actual fact, none of that really matters. Sometimes i vent in my poetry and that has nothing to do with rhyming I just let my mind do the writing. It's nice to know what people think, but in the end, the only vote that counts is your own.

Sarah --
Sorry that I did such an old poem ;; the title just really caught me -- and the fact that like 14 people had given it a 5, well, I had to check it out. This was really good ;; I didn`t feel that it flowed too well, and there was some unintentional rhyming. But don`t change anything about this -- it`s wonderful. 5/5.

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

Its wonderful even if the flow is different.this poem is so very true. I like how you talk about these different things that writers feel in your own words. Now thats a true poet.