Black Rainbow

by Grotesque Angel   Oct 3, 2005


I see the rain,
I see your pain,
I see a rainbow,
I see your sorrow

I feel the sun,
I feel the gun,
I feel the love,
I feel nothing above

I want to hold you,
I want to fall through,
I want nothing more,
I want to kill my sore

Rainbow, Rainbow
Why do you cry?
Is it because I lie?

Darling, Darling
Why did you die?
I know now its because I lied

Now your my black rainbow,
Lifeless and dead,
But the colour will return,
Once I clear my head

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  • 16 years ago

    by JustKristina

    AMAZING! It shows confusion that many people feel. I love it.. i'm sure many people can realte to this. alls i can say is awesome!

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Very unusual poem, but I enjoy your references to rainbows crying. That is so original and neat! It was a neat poem overall and it did carry a sad, sorrowful feel to it. As regards the comment you left on my contest, I made an apology to the contestants I disqualified. I wish I had given them a chance to change their poems, too....I will definitely view it as a learning experience towards the contest. Thank you for your input.
    Charisma*

  • 17 years ago

    by stargirl49

    It's sad, but i still love it. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by WakingFreedom

    I likeded it, it was awsome, 6/5, awsome....i guess....keep up the exallent work, i hope to read more right now, but i dont have time, i will read more!! defanitly (sp)

  • 18 years ago

    by Nearly but not quite

    Wow, that was really deep, and sad, also very good, 5/5
    Luv Helen xxx

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