Still thinking

by Jamie   Oct 4, 2005


Meaning immersed inside the soul
Is unsecured and running loose
Vaporized and torn apart
Each piece has its own excuse

Feel the pulse vibrate your body
Breath fades away with each beat
Spinning faster as you get dizzy
Collapse as you watch sanity retreat

Eyelashes drenched in tear drops
They tumble down your cheek
You lay and cry for hours
Youd get up but youre so weak

Your lips quiver as you break in two
Clear eyes fogged by smoky gray
Mind scattered across the memories
These situations are far too cliche

No longer can your body disperse grief
Your eyes have been drained and desiccated
The energy seeps through your body
Leaves your spirit desperate and negated

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  • 18 years ago

    by Rusted x Heart

    Nicely done, i really liked this poem. the emotions and images you used were very well thought out and crafted. Well done! The noly thing I thought wa sodd is...do you mean 'cliché' as opposed to 'clique'?

  • 18 years ago

    by TragicRomance

    Eyelashes drenched in tear drops
    They tumble down your cheek
    You lay and cry for hours
    Youd get up but youre so weak

    favorite part. I loved it! You are talented hun! Keeep it up! :) 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Interesting poem. Great vocabulary. Keep it up.

  • 18 years ago

    by ღPrEciiOuz~KiiZeZღ

    Wow...this is soooo good i really enjoyed it and i know what u mean by this. 5/5...u really and truly deserved it and keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by .

    Ive read better from you..but its still pretty good 4/5 keep it up
    Becky
    xoxo

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