Taking back tommorow

by brook   Oct 4, 2005


She sits straight up in her bed
As dreadful thoughts drift through her head
She did it this time the damage is done
She called the shots and finally won
She walked through the streets blood dripping from her hands
She had actually killed that cold-hearted man
She thought he loved her but really he didnt
All the love letters where nothing that she had written
So now as she sits up in her bed
She thinks to herself, wow that mans finally dead

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  • 20 years ago

    by Robyn

    Great poem :) keep it up
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  • 20 years ago

    by Donna

    Hey dis poem is incredible, i really enjoyed it. well done. 5/5. keep up the good work and thanks for de comment on mine, i really appreciate it

  • 20 years ago

    by Robin

    Wow... that was one incredible poem! I've always liked the idea of poetry telling a story : ) definitely a 5/5 from me.. great job
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    Robin
    Ps. Thanks for you comment.. just wondering... you said that my poem actually made sense unliked some of these other poems. When you said some of these other poems, did you mean some of my other poems? You don't need to answer.. but it's good to know things like that.. just to keep it in mind in case I change them or write new ones. Thanks a bunch : )

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