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Once upon a midnight blue
My dream of you had finally come true
We walked through the moonlight so clear
Oh how I enjoyed it, for you are my dear
I loved it when you held my hand so tight
Oh what a glorious night
Your breath it smelled like the fresh pine trees
When I am with you I feel so free
It started to rain and her hair got wet
And then our lips suddenly met
As we had stared into each other's eyes
We said our good-byes
I wondered if we would ever meet again
But then she said "this is the end"