Together

by David McIntosh   Oct 5, 2005


If god lets me in,
I will tell it to him.
I wont leave her down there,
Not all alone.

Put me back or bring her here.
I know that you know,
It's both of our fear.

We promised each other,
A long time ago,
We wont leave the other,
On this world alone.

So let us live long,
Until our days are gone,
Then together we will sleep,
And move on along.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    What a beautiful poem of the ultimate love and devotion.If we could all but find this type of love, the soulmate of our dreams, then nothing else would matter.This really touched me to the core of my heart.Excellent construction and made even stronger with the sincerity and meaning of the words and especially the emotion that just seems to radiate with such power of a loving heart.

  • 18 years ago

    by Void

    *tear* i love it. I can relate to it and connect so easily. If i could see you I would hug you, its incredible. short and sweet and all the more memorable. well done.

  • 18 years ago

    by Falling Up

    That poem is soo sweet and sad.. so much meaning... i love it! the only thing i have to say is that you rhymed almost your entire poem, exept the first stanza, doesnt ryme.. so just thought id tell you.... criticizm will make your poems better each time! so please comment on my poems too!

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