Angel

by BrokenMisery   Oct 5, 2005


Masking weakness in human clay.
Breaking the pressure that built the day.
Stretching to the sky but falling to the deep,
I've lost control of all I keep.

And I fall to my knees in desperate plea,
As blood stains my soul in this decree,
The stitches bind wings onto my back,
Colour like death, as dark as black.

Seeking the day in the darkness of night,
I played the game that lost my sight.
The pressure is building as my skin erodes,
My skeleton in waking, the dawn has rose.

And I fall to my knees in desperate plea,
As blood stains my soul in this decree,
The stitches bind wings onto my back,
Colour like death, as dark as black.

In the morning my face is revealed,
Breaking to pieces and never healed.
I'm not in heaven, I'm an angel to deceive,
I'm the angel of the devil this eve.

The wings carve my back into this dreadful sight,
Preying on the weak in the darkness of night.

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  • 18 years ago

    by AlexJ

    Wow!! Really cool poem! Damn! Keep up the good work!

  • 18 years ago

    by Letty

    You picked the right topic for this . It is beyond dark . In the begining I thought it was going to be another one of those cut poems that I've been reading so many of . But you proved me wrong . This poem is truly deep, it leaves the reader wondering and makes them have to go read it all over again . Well at least thats what I did . You are an exceptional artist, you're brilliant . I might not be as wise about poetry as most poets are, but I know poetry because thats who I am . So now you see why you recieved so many. " I'm speechless ." comments, or one worded comments . Because thats what you do, you leave us speechless . I mean you almost left me speechless, and I tell you thats very, very, rare . So keep up the good work . I'm placing you in my favorites so that I can keep up with you .

    you're friend

    Letty

  • 18 years ago

    by amelia

    Wow ! lovely poem
    colour like death as dark as black...
    nice line !!
    nice poem
    5/5
    i'll read more of ur poems soon
    thanks for ur comment
    do read "murder or suicide"
    is one of my fav poem...
    thanks a ton
    love
    amy

  • 18 years ago

    by Amy

    Babe this is awsum like ususal
    hey we're in ita 2getha. woo!! like atm aswell hehe
    well catchya l8z
    amy

  • 18 years ago

    by Elizabeth Ann

    Such rythmic finesse!

    This poem explored vulnerability and lonliness.

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