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by Britney Oct 5, 2005
Love, romance /
Walking down the beach hand in hand,
Its our footsteps we leave behind in the sand.
The moon provides the right amount of light.
So we walk until the end of the night.
Walking and gazing amongst the dark blue ocean,
Theres a cool ocean breeze that makes its own love potion.
Walking hand in hand and feeling so free,
The sky's a beautiful sight, for all to see.
The sky turns to pink, purple, orange, and red,
But the couple watches and reminisces what they said.
And that long walk on the beach they will always remember,
Even in the lonely cool months of December.
It will be a memory they file in their past,
A walk on the beach, and the spell the ocean breeze cast.
Thats so sweet! It reminds me of a trip to the beach w my ex,,,,,,sighs
by Lost & Delirious
This an amazing poem, I love the ocean, and you describe it so well.
I love the emotion you have in this poem...its sooo fresh...i c that u write a lot of love poems just like me...which means that u never fall out of love...keep up the great work and we'll hopefully keep in touch...5/5
by aaron c s
That was a beautiful poem. i loved every word. so many adjectives made this a truly great poem.
by Me&You (simply magical)
Another wonderful poem britney............made me remember my ex...lol. it was amazing to read!!
luv jess xoxoxox