You I lack

by Britney   Oct 5, 2005


Looking at all the pictures of our past,
Its hard to believe how it shattered like glass.
It seems like just yesterday you were all mine,
And now I'm just trying to pass the empty time.

I cannot get over a life without you,
I'm going insane I don't know what to do.
Because there's no longer you to help me off the ground,
Theres no longer you to just be around.

But now a thousand dreams I still believe,
And I'm still wearing my heart on its sleeve
I just wish that you would come back,
My heart is missing a piece, its you I lack.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    Beautiful Lines! Great job, nice words. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ღPrEciiOuz~KiiZeZღ

    This is soooo beautiful and i really enjoy it great job with the rhyming. its just what i feel and i think that u are truly in love and i love seeing ppl being in love...keep it up...5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    Cute! very nice flow, it was shorter but u brought it to its point nicley. 5/5
    thanks for r/c on my poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by aaron c s

    A great realization. i liked how it flowed ina fast paced ending. great job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Me&You (simply magical)

    Hey britney...........a great poem and it totally described what i'm going thru right now. It was interesting and well put together.go gal!!!
    luv jess xoxoxox

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