Remember/Forget

by Tristan   Oct 5, 2005


Remember the laughter
Forget all the pain
Remember the good time
The times without rain

Remember the hours
We talked on the phone.
Forget the times
I left you alone

Remember the way I told you
Every little thing
Forget the way we made fun of
The boyfriend that we'd bring

Remember the tears of joy
And forget the ones of sorrow
Please forget me today
Yet still remember me tomorrow

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  • 18 years ago

    by Pilar

    Hi!!!
    good job, i loved it, the contradiction was very well used, thanks for comenting on my poem!!!
    i can see ure very talented ^^
    keep on with the good work =)
    take care.

    adios!

    -pili-

  • 18 years ago

    by miss scooby

    WOW,

    I couldnt give you any advice if i wanted to because I loved this poem...I love the way you used contradiction within this poem...{remebering and forgetting} you did a awsome job and i particularly loved the last stanza of this poem;

    "Remember the tears of joy
    And forget the ones of sorrow
    Please forget me today
    Yet still remember me tomorrow"

    YOUR ONLY 13?? my god hunny lol you got skill and like i mentioned before the way you contradicted this poem made it unique and truely a pleasure to read...loved it and i wouldnt make any changes
    5/5

    take care and i look forward to poppin by and reading more of your work

    miss scooby

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