Falling

by Tristan   Jul 8, 2006


I stand in the rain so no one sees my tears
I'm letting go of everything I've held on to for years.
I wish that I was different because then I wouldn't feel this way
But depression's getting worse for me each and every day.
I don't really know why I cry but I start and I can't stop.
I'm struggling at the bottom for you to come out on top.
The medicine's not working, the pills don't work at all,
The doctors want me to stand up, but all I can do is fall.

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  • 17 years ago

    by erin

    Hey t.
    this is amazing. probably one of my favorites of yours. youre a great writer. i love you =] e.

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    You are an amazing poet. I loved this poem...especially the line about them coming out on top...good job! Hope you feel better by now! Jpoet*

  • 17 years ago

    by Marjan

    Oh Tristan, this was so sad. it's not true I hope.
    I'm very busy these days with studying because this year is really important for me but nevertheless, you will always remain somewhere between my thoughts and my prayers my friend.
    love you,
    Marjan

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