Inside

by AllHailTheHeartbreaker   Oct 6, 2005


He pushed me aside
And caused me to cry
He'd injured my pride
And I don't know why
I I had known why
He'd pushed me aside
I wouldn't have cried
Becaue I couldv'e died.

I almost died
But he pushed me aside
Because of that I cried
If I had known why
He pushed me aside
And he doesn't know I cried
For him and my pride
When I wasn't sure why
He pushed me aside.

And so for him I cried
Because he pushed me aside
I cried and cried and cried
No longer can I hide
These feelings that I have
Inside.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Emerald

    It`s a very good poem and it`s good written, but I think maybe you got a little too much aside. Still it`s a very good and strong poem and I very much liked it

  • 18 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    Good. I could feel a lot of emotion, strong, sincere emotion in this poem. I know what message and meaning you were trying to put across in the poem but the repetitive style makes it seem like a nursery rhyme, and I know this wasn’t the idea. Also, in the first stanza you have a couple of spelling mistakes. Overall though it was good. Thanks for sharing.

  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    Aww hun, this is a beautiful poem, very well written, i could really feel the emotion coming out of the poem, very expressive too, you have some great talent hun keep it up cant wait to read more, lubb you

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