by not.your.star.... Oct 6, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
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Forget the smiles that hid the tears. |
by JodiieBaybeh
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Very gd poem x |
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Im liking it deffinetly, maybe you could make it a little longer with a bit more emotion in it, but its deffinetly good. 5.5 good job. |