Wow Ali,
your poem's just great! 5/5 Nice job my friend ^_^ keep it up and thanks for sharing...your poems are an inspiration to me!

Oh my gosh that is an excellent poem! i really liked it, had a great flow, great meaning, and overall everything about it was good! keep up the great work!
check out some of mine if you get a chance. 5/5

This is really sweet i cant give anuy suggestions cause its just perfect. plz read and comment on sum of mine.

Bless whoever this is about is really lucky! This shows how much you care in a really sweet and well structured way. Clear set out. Excellent poem.

You should become a poet/ i'll buy all your poems lolz love this one just as much as the one before

Nice ali, keep it up.. tell me do you have some1? or do you write about an old love?

This is really a good poem

This is really a good poem