Comments : Today i broke!

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    No girl...that's not what i think...i think you are great girl...a tough girl...so beat it girl...you can do it...let happiness take away your sadness...and you know what...i finally able to finish my poem...change the title...it's Complete For Now...check it out and tell me what you think okey...And hey...email me if you need to talk...i reply to you ASAP...

  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    *hugs* I hope your okay hunn, if you need to talk just PM me alright? I love yeh
    thankyou for all your comments your wonderful stay strong

    Love Always
    Jenn
    and keep writing

  • 18 years ago

    by skyfox

    Another brilliant poem. I do know how you feel because your poem said it so well. Thankyou so much for your comments it means a lot. I find you an inspiration. We are going to make it to a better place. I JUST LOVE ALL YOUR WORK

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Aw I really like the ending.. its almost magical.. take care this poem is really intersting

  • 18 years ago

    by quietlybreaking

    A beautiful poem. you have portrayed your emotions brilliantly,

    and that people DO notice me
    but they just fail to care

    that bit just there hit me, i realise, after reading your poem, thta this is the case. people do notice another in pain and hurt, but stick their nose in the air and walk away.
    an old friend of mine had a stroke outside a shopping center, no one stopped to help, society today is so harsh.
    anyway, i am starting to babble.
    thankyou,aylz

  • 18 years ago

    by my_little_secret

    That was a good poem cos it showed the truth. A lot of people, especially people you think are your friends, do give up tryingt o help after a prolonged period of your unhappiness. Keepwriting! xx

  • 18 years ago

    by unbelievable life

    Excellent poem...thanks for the comment on mine...i love comments lol...i love your poems theyre so great...
    XXX angel

  • 18 years ago

    by Stabbylou

    I like this, i feel that way too, it's really sad 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Serendipity08

    Sometimes I feel weak too, so I understand, but don't let other people's comments get to you, they probably don't know your situation.