Unexplainable (Lose It All)

by Joey Matthews   Oct 9, 2005


I have a long list
in which I doubt
I'll ever make it
through to the other side
it's not possible
I hang on the edge
falling down
all I ever seem to get
is all the pain
different feelings
different motions
I can't explain
where I'd rather be
the truth is I don't know
just how far I can go
before I lose it all

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  • 17 years ago

    by Laloser05

    Wow,
    It's different, definately. But i liked it, different is good.
    Keep it up, i found it really great, and i can certainly see that those 5 years paid off, for practice does make perfect.
    Thanx for commenting on one of my poems months ago.. i am a bit slow.
    :)Smile:)