Secret

by Mangrove Blossom   Oct 9, 2005


When I see you,
My hear skips a beat.....
When I hear you,
I lose my breathe.......
When I talk to you,
I feel like flying.......
When I hear your laugh,
Energy surges within me........
When you say everything will be ok,
My heart swells with joy.....
When you don't give up,
I can strive for excellence........
When you walk away,
I feel nothing........

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  • 17 years ago

    by Emi

    I know how you feel lol. Well....more like just scared to death lol. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Michael

    (gasp) HE TOOK MY NAME!!! Lol...

    OMG!!! THIS WAS A LOVLY POEM! Great use of using ur sense when u r near that person! 10/5 for sure!

  • 18 years ago

    by Michael

    Excellent writting, specially for someone as young. Great job, keep it up.

  • 18 years ago

    by PatheticLittleGirlxx

    OMG evrything u wrote is exactly how i feel!!! I "hearts" it ^_^

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