Empty Soul
by LadyPearl Oct 10, 2005
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Empty, silent, mystery shrouds my mind |
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20 years ago
by Kayla
Wow! this is truly great. I love the emotion that is diplayed...Keep it up
xoxo,
Kayla -
20 years ago
by x Saiya
Awesome right.
I love the last stanza, and also this one;
"A touch, a drop of crimson taste
despised, rejected in distaste
fallen angel grow in me
The only person I can be"
The poem just.. flowed beautifully. You are a wonderful poet. 5/5
Saiya -
20 years ago
by BeeJay
Wow! so full of emotion! You are a great poet! Keep up the wonderful work! My fav. stanza was:
"A touch, a drop of crimson taste
despised, rejected in distaste
fallen angel grow in me
The only person I can be"
It flowed so beautifully together, as did the entire poem! Wonderful job!
Love always,
~BJ~ -
20 years ago
by x Saiya
Wow great job, full of emotion.. You're very good keep it up =) 5/5 again
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20 years ago
This was my fav part...:
"Eyes of shadows, bound me tight
A world of blood I shall fight
Again I drown in my distress
life of misery bound to a mess"
this is soooo full of emotion. i loved it u r very talented...imma have my eye out for you...doin a great job...5/5 once again
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