Aww.. that was so sad and sweet at the same time.. but i reli lykd it.. it was so full of emotion, in particular sorrow.. im sorry if it is true
my absolute fav part in the poem was ur last line.. it reli stuck
keep up the talent
I just wrote a new poem kind of similar to this one. It is called "I'm Sorry" It is about my grandma..Me and her SOMETIMES got along but not really. If you get the time, read it.. :)
I really like this poem. It is very sad though. Good job and thanks for your comment on my one other new poem. That meant alot and I laughed when you said the whole thing about buying my books in the next few years. I won't stop writing...I promise!
Oops..dammit...it looks like i got into your poem so much that i didn't even notice that i've read, rated, && commented on it before...=(...well..heh, i rated it again cause i forgot...and just now i found my comment. Sorry. lol, and it's still 5/5