Really sab...yet so touching poem. It was well written and all, the flow was also good...it's just sad, sorry. 5/5 Thanks for sharing and keep it up...always take care.

A very touching poem. I am so sorry but you your poem expresses your feelings very well

Aww.. that was so sad and sweet at the same time.. but i reli lykd it.. it was so full of emotion, in particular sorrow.. im sorry if it is true
my absolute fav part in the poem was ur last line.. it reli stuck
keep up the talent
nannoush

Beautiful poem
very well written
5/5
rhyming is good... flow is also good...
keep writing
love
amy

ARGH!! This poem made me cry a little but, it's a wonderfully sad poem. I love it. 5/5

Sorry, I'm a spelling freak, I noticed on this line: "Tear are falling, missing you."

I think it should be "tears" but I'm not sure, if you wanted it to be writen "tear" ^__^ Just something I noticed.

Wow that's beautiful, yet so sad..
I love it. 5/5

Keep it up

That was very good and sad you are a very good writer

Great poem. It was subtle and to the point. Got your message acrossed and I didn't see any errors. 5/5

That was a great poem i love it keep it up im so sorri for your wat u have been through

I just wrote a new poem kind of similar to this one. It is called "I'm Sorry" It is about my grandma..Me and her SOMETIMES got along but not really. If you get the time, read it.. :)

I really like this poem. It is very sad though. Good job and thanks for your comment on my one other new poem. That meant alot and I laughed when you said the whole thing about buying my books in the next few years. I won't stop writing...I promise!

You are very good yourself. Keep it up. 5/5

Wow really well written it flowed great and was fileld with alot of sorrow..really sad but still really good =)

Aww, that was really beautiful, I mean it was good poem and had a beautiful... just something about it... I dunno. But it was really good. 5/5

Good poem, but a sad one. Good rhyme scheme and flow.

I really loved that poem, it was sad but really brilliant. keep it up
I think the first stanza really caught the whole poem for me, i like it when that happens.
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Aww.. that just made me cry.. i love it.. its so beautiful in its dedication and sorrowful words.. i adored the first stanza.. it reli stood out
and also the last line.. that just brings me to tears..

beautiful beautiful work..
im so sorry for ur loss
keep up the good work
take care
NannO

p.s. thnx a lot for ur comments

Aww... that was really sad, but beautiful... i don't know what you mean, you're really not that bad of a writer! thanks for the comments... i'll check out some more of urs!

Wow...thats good...its beautiful and touching:):)...thankyou soo much for ur comments..they made me feel special:P:P..and yeah im 14:P:P...Anyways, beautiful poem!!!

Oops..dammit...it looks like i got into your poem so much that i didn't even notice that i've read, rated, && commented on it before...=(...well..heh, i rated it again cause i forgot...and just now i found my comment. Sorry. lol, and it's still 5/5