Comments : See you

  • 15 years ago

    by Gesselle Valle

    Really sab...yet so touching poem. It was well written and all, the flow was also good...it's just sad, sorry. 5/5 Thanks for sharing and keep it up...always take care.

  • 15 years ago

    by skyfox

    A very touching poem. I am so sorry but you your poem expresses your feelings very well

  • 15 years ago

    by NannO

    Aww.. that was so sad and sweet at the same time.. but i reli lykd it.. it was so full of emotion, in particular sorrow.. im sorry if it is true
    my absolute fav part in the poem was ur last line.. it reli stuck
    keep up the talent
    nannoush

  • 15 years ago

    by amelia

    Beautiful poem
    very well written
    5/5
    rhyming is good... flow is also good...
    keep writing
    love
    amy

  • 15 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    ARGH!! This poem made me cry a little but, it's a wonderfully sad poem. I love it. 5/5

    Sorry, I'm a spelling freak, I noticed on this line: "Tear are falling, missing you."

    I think it should be "tears" but I'm not sure, if you wanted it to be writen "tear" ^__^ Just something I noticed.

  • 15 years ago

    by x Saiya

    Wow that's beautiful, yet so sad..
    I love it. 5/5

    Keep it up

  • 15 years ago

    by shawn hoskins

    That was very good and sad you are a very good writer

  • 15 years ago

    by Dark Kitten

    Great poem. It was subtle and to the point. Got your message acrossed and I didn't see any errors. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by LuVlYlUfFlY

    That was a great poem i love it keep it up im so sorri for your wat u have been through

  • 15 years ago

    by Jackie Marie

    I just wrote a new poem kind of similar to this one. It is called "I'm Sorry" It is about my grandma..Me and her SOMETIMES got along but not really. If you get the time, read it.. :)

    I really like this poem. It is very sad though. Good job and thanks for your comment on my one other new poem. That meant alot and I laughed when you said the whole thing about buying my books in the next few years. I won't stop writing...I promise!

    You are very good yourself. Keep it up. 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by we_all_live_to_die

    Wow really well written it flowed great and was fileld with alot of sorrow..really sad but still really good =)

  • 14 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    Aww, that was really beautiful, I mean it was good poem and had a beautiful... just something about it... I dunno. But it was really good. 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Sarah Drew

    Good poem, but a sad one. Good rhyme scheme and flow.

  • 14 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I really loved that poem, it was sad but really brilliant. keep it up
    I think the first stanza really caught the whole poem for me, i like it when that happens.
    xxxxxxxxxxx

  • 14 years ago

    by NannO

    Aww.. that just made me cry.. i love it.. its so beautiful in its dedication and sorrowful words.. i adored the first stanza.. it reli stood out
    and also the last line.. that just brings me to tears..

    beautiful beautiful work..
    im so sorry for ur loss
    keep up the good work
    take care
    NannO

    p.s. thnx a lot for ur comments

  • 14 years ago

    by Mousie

    Aww... that was really sad, but beautiful... i don't know what you mean, you're really not that bad of a writer! thanks for the comments... i'll check out some more of urs!

  • 14 years ago

    by LockedInEternity

    Wow...thats good...its beautiful and touching:):)...thankyou soo much for ur comments..they made me feel special:P:P..and yeah im 14:P:P...Anyways, beautiful poem!!!

  • 14 years ago

    by LockedInEternity

    Oops..dammit...it looks like i got into your poem so much that i didn't even notice that i've read, rated, && commented on it before...=(...well..heh, i rated it again cause i forgot...and just now i found my comment. Sorry. lol, and it's still 5/5