Too Late

*hey guys tell me if i should keep it like this or keep writing.thanks.

-crying-
''I can't take this anymore.I hate life.I hate it!!!''
-walks to the drawer,reaches for knife-
-knock knock-
-thinking,''oh great.''
-knock knock knock-
''What the fu)k do you want?!?''
''What's going on?Why are you locked up?''
-getting nervous-
''Get out of there!Get out now!!''
-Gets the knife and cuts deep-
-Blood's pouring down-
-Banging on door-
''Get out!!!please don't do it!get out!please,i love you!!!''
-gets frustrated-
-runs out of breath,falls to floor-
-clunk-
''oh my god!oh my god!open the door!!open it!!''
-calls a neighbor and they both break down the door-
''Oh my god!!!oh my god!!!''
-shakes the body,no movement.DEAD.-
''No!!!!!!''
-Too late.-