MIRROR

by kat   Oct 11, 2005


I caught myself staring at this young girl
Her hair bright golden with swirling curls
She looked so sad in her pink flowing dress
Alone she stands in the corner far from the rest

Nobody seem to notice the pain on her face
She hides it but in her eyes her sorrow trace
Nobody can hear what she shouts in her mind
Not a soul comforts her, no friend she did find

I saw her tears roll down from her blushing cheek
I felt her pain inside my heart and it made me weak
So I walk towards her to give her my helping hand
But she vanished in my eyes in like a flick of a wand

I then realized that there was no girl in front of me
It was just me in the mirror all along looking at me
It made me remember the times that I did feel pain
But I put myself together and walked out in the rain

October 10, 2005
Monday
8:28 pm

This poem I wrote is for people who want to give up
Remember that only you can make a brand new start
Nobody can stop your world from turning, only you
You just have to be strong and you'll make it through

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lu

    Kat ...
    I loved the optimism in the end of this poem ..
    You are so right ... only you can change the diresction your life is taking...

    A sad poem with a beautiful twist at the end ...Beautiful poem ..

  • 18 years ago

    by Sourav

    Great one! Just loved the theme of the poem! Wonderfully written!

  • 18 years ago

    by InDePeNdEnT AnD BeAuTiFuL

    Wow..another really wonderful poem..i love ur poems soo much they express a lot....thanks again for the comment on my poem...sierra

  • 18 years ago

    by jac

    That was really well worded.. i loved it, and it had great meaning with the words.. stay strong! -jac-