Comments : Today.

  • 18 years ago

    by Chloe

    This is fantastic! I like that it links how feeling like you look bad on the outside makes you feel bad on the inside. It's weird that people who are beautiful don't realise it, and think they're ugly, so in their attempt to make themselves "beautiful" actually make themselves ugly.

  • 18 years ago

    by Brittany

    Omg, definetly my fav. poem of the week. it is soo soo true!!

    loooove it!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Valentin

    Wow this is a really good poem.. good job done

  • 18 years ago

    by my_little_secret

    The constant rhyming gives it the imprression of confusion, justb over and over,k endless tumult of confuoin. Good way to imitate life!! good job

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Wow so true!!
    liked it...the rhythms were sometimes confused but overall nice job:P
    take care xoxoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Cuddles

    This is one of the best poems I've read today. I don't think much about it, but life can be really sad sometimes. Incredible write!

  • 17 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Excellent, excellent, excellent! Of all the many I have read today this is by far the best. You are so talented. Every bit of this poem reached one hundred percent perfection, from the words to the structure, I loved it!!! 555555555555555/5

  • 17 years ago

    by corey mcmillan

    Great poem i like your style. thanks for reading and commenting on mine. i have another called zombie tales you should read it and let me know what you think when you get time.

  • 17 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    I actually like the way this reads. I felt I was reading faster and faster, getting lost on a train.. It was very clever. Well done. xx