Say You Love Me & I\'ll Be Fine

by Ashes of a Black Rose aka Night Child   Oct 12, 2005


You didn\'t see my scars,
But you saw my hidden pain,
You saw on my soul that were wounds that forever remain.

You didnt judge,
You didnt tease,
You didnt let on that you noticed these.

I\'ll be alright,
I promise I\'m fine,
please just hold me one more time...

You feel with me,
But you don\'t know my fear,
You havent seen me shut down when he comes near.

But you dont question,
You dont pry,
You never make me tell you why.

I\'ll be alright,
I promise I\'m fine,
Please just kiss me one last time...

You\'ve heard of my tears,
You know when i cry,
But you dont see the panic in my eye.

You didnt abandon,
You stayed real close,
You kept me from that fatal dose.

I\'m not alight,
and I\'m not fine,
just say you love me
one
last
time

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  • 18 years ago

    by holly

    Sad but beautiful exellent job i espically liked this bit

    I'll be alright,
    I promise I'm fine,
    Please just kiss me one last time...

    and the last stanza. . mm do you call it a chorus in poetry hmm i dunno but the bit you keep repating i lied it yeah great poem xxALLyxx

  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    Aww hun, this is so cute, it almost made me cry its so sweet, i loved it a lot wow, thumbs up my dear awesome keep it up hun lubbb youu

  • 18 years ago

    by hm

    Hey....very deep hope ur okay...keep shining and do wat u do best!!!!.....hm

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