by TornTears Oct 13, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
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Life's not so easy when you cry yourself to sleep |
by Joe Holland
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Wow, that was awesome! you are brilliant. i can relate to almost all of it. beautiful 5/5 definately |
by Laura Ash
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Great poem. 5/5 Keep on writing. It was so sad and I can relate to it. |
by Amanda
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OH MY GOSH you poem was fantastic. It really brought tears to my eyes. I can really relate to your poem in so many ways. keep up with the poems mate. :) |
by SuperJenius
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Wow i loved it , you're a great writer |
by Falling Up
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WOW... i really liked the poem , and how u used the beginning of the poem, to end it... its so true too...so much depth and meaning... you really give me a different perspective on things.... the only thing i have to say is that it has good rhyming, but you could cut down some sentences to make the sentence structure flow more better in your stanzas.. other than that great work and please comment on my poetry too! |