Fake smile

by *-*PoisonedSoul~_~   Oct 14, 2005


The tears start here
the pain ends there
how will I know
you'll be there
I smile to show
I'm not alone

we will all die
we will all cry
why does it matter
who gets to go first

so if your friend
is thinking about dieing
stop crying
and let them go
don't say no
let them go!

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  • 18 years ago

    by *~Katie~*

    Awesome poem .... and no i dont slit my wrist ( anymore ) ... thanks for the comments

  • 18 years ago

    by CE

    This poem was simple, but very good at them same time

  • 18 years ago

    by Aidyn

    I'm not trying to preach, by the way...I hope my last comment didn't sound like I was...anyways...

  • 18 years ago

    by Aidyn

    I agree with DA; you don't need to worry. You've still got time to do what you wished and couldn't and...well, just to live in the moment...as do all of us, for that matter... We all DO leave at some point, but that doesn't mean we should be too eager to be first to do it...Anyways, it's still a great poem with a powerful and thoughtful message...made me stop and think. Thanks for commenting!

  • 18 years ago

    by Reasonless

    Nicely Done,
    The emotion was ace, ah the fake smiles and maskes we all use to hide the true intent of out pain and love, a motif and symbol used often as a mirror yet never gets old, Well done, chin up, you have years ahead of you yet m'dear, I promise good ones

    D.A

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