Loving To Hate You Baby!

by Anthony   Oct 14, 2005


Like a tsunami, you left my heart in pieces.

Our growing dislike of each other increases.

Like Anima Sola, I see you in flames.

Your stupid remarks are always the same!

I have a bullet here engraved just for you.

Load it in your gun and I'll tell you what to do.

Is this hatred more than you bargained for?

The hatred I feel would leave you broken on the floor.

Once I would have loved you, but that was long ago.

The dam is now broken and my hatred's free to flow.

Smiles fade into darkness, leaving back it's tears.

Faces left unscrambled, influenced by fears..

What worse? The pain of knowing, or not knowing what to do?

Your world is crashing down, and I'm still laughing at you.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Atomic

    I think the poem was wonderful, but I think you could have gone on without the cheesy title. Take off the "baby" part and I'll hear it even more.

    "I have a bullet here engraved just for you.

    "Load it in your gun and I'll tell you what to do."

    That's my favourite part.

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • 18 years ago

    by Andrea

    Wow! very good. i like how you put it and your wording. very different and unique(sp?)

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