Land of Death

by midnight♥lullibys   Oct 16, 2005


Cold bare bars hold me here as captive
Made of steal and not willing to forgive
Blinded by my angst through apathetic eyes
Tormenting, by displaying Grey clouded skies

This prison in my mind is so strong and binding
Unaware of my beaten soul, cold and struggling
Struggling to get out, but always in vain
Enslaved by a cobweb of a cage, nothing to gain

Shadows dance in ritual upon bare ground
While hooded figures above glare without a sound
Beating drums count down till th moment of truth
When demons feast on the guiltiest youth

Fires roar encasing me in here tightly
In the depths of hell nothings taken lightly
Simple mistakes can cost you freedom
Beware, consequences exist but whats done is done

All exits sealed with this monstrous flame
*Hysterical* rhythmic dances fill with shame
Over powering my senses without rest
Spirits passing menacingly through my chest

As you can see I've already reached my fate
Thriving for eternity in this world of hate
Never again to see broad skies or rich soil
Awaiting for continuous torture as cauldron boil

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  • Wow...so much emotion...5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by fallentears

    I really like how this poem was written. Great poem. keep it up

  • Very well written poem.
    Great choice of words, i liked it alot

    Thanks for your comment, i really appreciate it.

    xxx cici xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by .

    Wow..yep thats all i have to say..so ill say it again..WOW..yep

  • 18 years ago

    by Tiny Reader

    Not really my type of poem, but you clearly have a talent for this. It was well structured with a good flow. Well done x

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