Save me

by midnight♥lullibys   Jan 16, 2006

Look into my eyes
As I Float away
Struggling to get by
Save me if you may

Look into my soul
Through and through
Feel this empty hole
Now there because of you

Hold onto my hand
As I love you entirely
And with every grain of sand
I feel you more wholeheartedly

As soon as I feel safe
You whip your hand away
And again I don't feel safe....
Disappointed and astray

Look into my eyes
As I float away
Struggling to get bye
Save me if you may...


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  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    Very well written. Amazing work. coz i've added uyou to my favourites, i will possibly comment in the near future, that's if i'm ever allowed on teh net again. i'm grounded so bad!!!

    cya, Suzie

  • 14 years ago

    by Danielle

    I really like this poem! Good work!

  • 14 years ago

    by Loulou

    Its really good i like it alot 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    Please be honest and tell me how to improve

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