1/2 Empty, or 1/2 Full?

by *Juicy_Secret*   Oct 16, 2005


How am i suppose to see you as
1/2 empty, or 1/2 full,
You let it eat you up inside, you treat your glass so cruel.
Where is the courage that once stride down the hall,
You had such pride and potential
you were always walking tall.
Now your a prisoner of your
own silence,
Words bite at your tongue and
leave your mouth with dryness.
Your addicted, a phean, you should
be ashamed,
Your devious, an abuser, your the
only one to blame.
Its not to late to change
your glass but always make
sure its full,
Its was once empty, but now i know it wasn't you fault, i think differently of you.

6/22/05
please vote/comment thanks!

Christina Chavez© Copyright 2005

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  • 18 years ago

    by StMario

    Great writing... I am glad that you changed your thoughts about this person.... I have a poem that I would love for you to read... this i hope will give you a greater insite of someone elses mishaps, misjudgements, and mistakes... it is called "who am I"

  • 18 years ago

    by StMario

    Hey! I love your poem question for life, a slip of my finger gave you a B, so to let you know upfront! it is an A+ poem.. This one is great.... You are a thinker.... continue to do your thing....

  • 18 years ago

    by Juls

    I love it...its pretty good hun. Anyways keep up the fab work u r grrrrreat!! talk to u later
    Juls!

  • 18 years ago

    by aaron c s

    I REALLY liked that. u definately put thought into it and it shows. great poem.....one thing i didnt like was the ending though. the rest of the poem had flow but the ending didnt. great poem over all though.

  • 18 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wow, awsome poem. I loved it. Keep up the good work.

    ~ItalianStallion A.K.A. Joe~

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