Will Succeed

by Katie Bennett   Oct 16, 2005


My life is faltering with the mistakes I've made
Seems I've lost the games I played
Mistake after mistake, seems I cant win
But I'm not giving up, I won't give in
Say I'm a failure, and I'll prove you wrong
I will succeed; I have been all along
Doesnt matter how many times you fall down
But how many times you're willing to get off the ground
I've been in a lot of trouble, that, I'll admit
But I'm not gonna beat myself up over it
We're all humans, we make mistakes
And I will triumph, no matter how much it takes
You cant break me down and you cant break my spirit
I wont give up succees if I'm already so near it
So say anything at all that you want about me
I'll prove you wrong and I will succeed!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Mild insomnia

    Wow, really inspirational poem hun, stay strong. Thankyou so much for your comment

    emma x

  • 18 years ago

    by sexicowwss

    Oh my god i am in such a tough sititution at the moment. Exactly in the situtation that you are in but you've inspired me in everyway. Sentence by sentence of your poem thank you and this is the best poem i've read

    regards me! =]

  • 18 years ago

    by flawed diamond

    This poem is so good. You should get it on a plaque so you can have that inspiration right in front of your face. It's really and inspiration for me. I'm like you though, nobody is commenting on my poem so maybe you could if you read them. Keep on writing.

  • 18 years ago

    by Matters

    Wow this is a really good poem & I like it really gave me an "emotional boost." =D Check out some of my poems, maybe you'll like them.

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