Comments : Burden

  • 18 years ago

    by jac

    This was really well written.. i liked it alot! keep up the great work, stay strong. -peace-

  • 18 years ago

    by LOOPE

    Wow, wow, wow, I love it, it's incredible. did I said I love it? well, I love it. Excellent poem, you're great. I love the way you put the words together and the meaning of it. keep it up. take care.

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    OMG!! U never cease to amaze me with u're amazing talent. the only suggestion for u is this line:
    "But the next I am depressing and angry
    And my love for you all cascades down"
    should depressing be depressed??

    anyway amazing poem and i totally understand. Am always here 4 u k?! take care xoxoxoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by xEmmax

    Wow, amazing poem xx

  • 18 years ago

    by skyfox

    WOW!!!!!!!!!! What a truly brilliant poem. I could almost swear you wrote it for me. Your words hit home on so many levels. Thankyou for sharing. Again I have to say your writing is inspirational. You have a talent that is rare and very special.

  • 18 years ago

    by Stabbylou

    Oh wow, the way it ends, quality x

  • 18 years ago

    by rene

    Nice!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by JAY Poet

    Great poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Amazing as always...you are fantastic...your poems are so good...really love it...keep on going...

  • 18 years ago

    by xEmmax

    Wow thats an amazing poem, i loved it! keep it up xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Kiss Of Death09

    Oooo my gosh.... this poem reminds me sooo much of myself!!! I can really relate to this poem!!! Great poem!! powerful expressing your feelings!! I like that!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Brilliant poem very powerfully writen