HoW CoUlD yOu Go

by hm   Oct 17, 2005


You promised that you would never leave me
you said you loved me but we justed couldn't be
so now I'm all on my own
this is how forever it will stay because i want to be alone
i couldn't stand another heart beak
in this life so far is way to much to take
but i really don't get this?
if you want to no how i feel just look at my wrist
you took my heart and ripped it in two
we were together for a month how the fuk could you
i now cant look into your eyes anymore
because in my heart you were the i treasured and adore
i wounder if everything we had was just a lie?
i no it wasn't working but i wish you never said goodbye!

hey people i wrote this poem awhile ago because me and my girlfriend broke-up and i thought she liked me but i guess she really didn't after all....

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  • 17 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Thats a nice poem! yet sad!

  • 18 years ago

    by DeathsLove

    Very dark and interesting. You wrote it really well I like the part about the wrist... that if you wanted to see how i feel look at my wrist. I too have gone though the same experienced and you have captivated the dark essence of the situation perfectly. Bravo 5/5
    Carly

  • 18 years ago

    by candy

    Love this poem been there know how you feel.
    candy

  • Hey, ive been in the same boat, on the same raging river. its tough, but pull through babe, and very good write! 5/5