This is an amazing poem, I didn't understand it the first time, but now I do. I don't have self-confidence either. It sucks, right? Your poem is great though, I loved the last stanza.
Keep writing.
XoXo. G.a.B.y.

Stop putting urself down..u're poems are just amazing!!
yeh that 'Untitled" poem of mine did imply train tracks...so u shouldn't be confused:P

with this poem, i loved the way u wrote it...self-confidence is such an issue that only u can solve...
take care hun xoxox

Amazing hun it kinda confused me but the more times i read it the more it makes sense which of course makes it a brilliant write! xox

This poem is incredible. I agree with torn apart, don't put yourself down. Honestly, it really is great. Your use of imagery is perfect and this is a very powerful piece. Well done

I agree with torn apart and purple fears. you are such an amazing writer, and i bet your an amazing person too...dont put yourself down hun. you have heaps of talent. that poem was awesum...i love it so much, especially the last four lines...very imaginative =) your a very powerful and emotional writer...keep it up xx

Haha like many others i was confused at first but, reading it through again its a wonderful poem and it made me think, not many peoples poetry can do that:) keep it up!

Jenn x0x0x

I love ur poems this is one of my favorites..yea i meant ignore..well i cant write or spell but hell here i am lol...anyway thanx for the comment im glad you enjoyed it...keep it up...

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Wow awesome job! very unique poem and i absolutely loved it! I really enjoyed the begining of the poem though it really got me interested, anyways great job! keep up the great work!

I love this poem. you should get it copyrighted. i wish i could write poems like that yet again 5/5