Im driving in my car..

by Han84   Oct 19, 2005


I'm driving in my car,
music loud,
laughing with my mates,
5 of us in my car singing along,
I'm driving my car..

we went out to a club,
danced till late all together,
no thoughts in my head,
we got chatted up,
we turned them away,
we are driving in my car..

its peaceful on the roads,they are empty,
i feel free,
free from pain,
free from everything and everyone..
i go into my own little worlds,
i don't notice my mates singing along..
i snap out of my little world..
I'm driving in my car..

we pull up on the road in town,
then we see him,
the one who left me,
i see him holding hands with another
which ain't me..
i freeze in the driving seat,
they all see,
they see me,
i want to cry
how did i feel?
what did i feel...
nothing or too much?..
i froze.. i looked at him
he looked at me,
they carried on walking to wards us..
a tear rolls down my face,
he gets closer,
i wiped it away and he saw,
the girls saw all,
i looked back in my mirror to see him look back..

i were driving in my car alone..
thinking, dreaming, feeling down,
then i get a text from someone i never knew cared!
"you mean so much to me! let me know how you feel!"
i smiled..
we talked..
i felt someone truly cared,
i drive in my car not alone,
he now See's me not driving alone..

PLEASE PLEASE LEAVE COMMENTS FOR ME.. WOULD REALLY LIKE THEM AND VOTES WOULD BE GREAT TOO.
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  • 18 years ago

    by Eva T.

    That was good, but i quickly read it because i'm at school and the bell is about to ring.

  • 18 years ago

    by Narcissism

    Really good, i loved it!!

  • 18 years ago

    by .:.Mandy.:.

    Aw I loved the way you told a story in a poem. Really kewl! Keep up the great work!:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Holly Nicole Williams

    Awesome!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Anna

    Awww! Thats a great poem! I'm glad you're not that sad anymore! Keep up the great work!