Im broken, can you fix me?

by Emerald   Oct 19, 2005


Do you know that feeling?
That feeling of love.
Like when you're with him the only thing you can think about is that you don't ever want to spend another second without him!
And when you're close to him, rapped in his arms.
You just close your eyes and listens to his heart beat,
you feel like you're melting together.
You feel like you're one.
And every time you say goodbye it feels like you're ripping a part of you're heart out.
It feels like you`re dying inside!
And when you see him love someone else.
The way he used to love you.
You don't feel anger, you don't feel rage.
You just feel hollow.
and You wonder if you`ll ever be able to love again.
you just cant imagine life without him.
You feel so dead inside.
You wonder if you`ll ever be able to breath again.
As you saw them together the earth stopped moving.
You couldn't grasp it.
And you yell out in pain!
If love was ever so sweet.
This is a thousand times worse.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Nici

    From the title of this poem I was expecting something different. Maybe one of those forced restrictive rhyming pieces? So it sort of threw me a bit when I did start to read. Anyway I'm rambling..........

    The poem worked well as a whole and the emotion behind the words was clear.

    Keep writing
    Nici

  • 18 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    I liked this poem of yours. I look forward to reading more from you. =]

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Oh, yeah, that is love. Nicely done, the description seems fit. If your arms are open, you will find and be loved again. I hope your heart is healing if it happened to you...

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by the love of another fills my soul

    This is a greta poem. its writte exactly as if you were writting it from experainc. is that true? and yes you do need to put "you're " in. but nice work keep writting. i felt that way one time beofer to

  • 18 years ago

    by Tiny Reader

    This is really cute and works well as free verse. One comment, a lot of the time you wrote 'your' it should have been 'you're' Re-read it, and if 'you are' makes sense in its place, change it to 'you're'. Good poem though. 4/5

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