Tell me

by Aurora   Oct 20, 2005


Tell me just once more, i still don't understand, why are you untrue to me, cant you quit being so unfair.
i don't think ill ever get it, since theres nothing left to get, theres no more dangled promises, no longer love to share.
its all over now for me, i no longer care, Ive got nothing more to give, not a feeling left to spare.
tell me just once more, as i just don't understand, why is you heart so cold, will you ever give me your hand.
i know i hardly get it but, is it me the one who needs to understand, your the one leaving me behind, your the one rejecting my love, breaking my heart,
why don't you try and see how i see things.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Rolo

    Hm, I think you should structure it better....it might make it easier to read. The overall idea was pretty good..but like I said structure the lines and I think it will be better. Not bad, you have potential...just keep writing.

    ~rolo

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