Anything but,

by Carrie   Oct 21, 2005


Its a flat out no
i refuse to listen
weeks pass by
still I'm alone
you are perfect
as far as i can see
but the flaws hidden
behind obsession
understand this
ignoring me
avoiding me
makes me anxious
smitten
with ideas
and hopes
of the next time
our eyes will meet
is it yes?
is it no?
why cant you
yell at me
humiliate me
scare the love away
you can do anything
anything but
leave me waiting.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    Wow, can I relate to this one!The waiting, the not knowing, the hope, the love.This is very well written and full of emotional angst,you convey emotion so well.I absolutely love the last two lines(check out my piece Where Were You? for a similiar 'waiting' theme and you'll see why I said I can relate).This is really good.

  • 18 years ago

    by JAY Poet

    Great poem please read some of my new poems!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Erica

    Beautiful carrie!! i miss you so much...they banned me from the chatroom..id unno why and it sucks cuz i miss all my buddies...anyways ttyl keep it up hun
    ~cherry

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