by Grotesque Angel Oct 21, 2005
category :
Life, society /
about society
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For a time unknown to mortal man, |
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It is true that the more recent they are they're better |
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A little bumpy for flow now and then but I liked it. Cool ending. Very nice work. |
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Great job dude, the more recent i read, the better they are. 5/5 |
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Amazing work!!! reminds me of "The Lottery" by Shirley Jackson... awesome write! you're very talented. keep it up! |
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Great work matt, it isn't repetitive as u say. however, 'eternity alone'?.... |