Detriment at 8:30 sharp

by Jamie   Oct 22, 2005


Its 8:30 and its silent
I fear it has begun
Theres no one here to comfort
As feelings flow undone

Its 8:30 and its Friday
Im defective, my heart is sick
Wound has been renewed
And the blood is flowing thick

Its 8:30 and Im waiting
Afraid I have nothing to wait for
The longing and the thrist
Shreds me apart hardcore

Its 8:30 and Im crying
Crying for what cannot be
If we weren't meant to be together
Then why do I still see you only with me?

Its 8:30 and the lights on
Too tired to close my eyes
Too lazy to get up and turn it off
Too bored for your reprise

Its 8:30 and Im let down
Your words were unexpected
The disappointment mostly toxic
Didn't think this time Id be rejected

Its 8:30 and I'm wishing
To hear from you once more
Tell me that you want me
That Im everything youre looking for

It was 8:30 when I started
But now its 8:54
You either want me or you dont
But I cant do this anymore

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  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    OMG!! I hate it when you put yourself down, i totally look up to ur style of writing. Hun i hope you're ok, i know how much that can suck. What an arsehole:P
    here 4 u hun xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Britney

    Awwl.. That poem is a heartbreaker. But I still absoluetly loved it. I can tell that you put alot of emotion into it and thats what made it so great! Great Job cannot wait to read more of your work. I would have given it a 6 xox Britney xox and btw no the rhymes were not weak they were awesome

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