Comments : I Want a Girl!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Lovely piece, my friend....And when the times right you'll find that beautiful woman....

    Love, Ann

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    HEy darL! grEaT p0em! vEry weLl written!
    t0uching linEs. h0pe y0u finD s0me0ne
    wh0 fiTs thaT descripti0n!! =) keep it uP
    l0tz 0f l0ve d0ra
    *..x00o00x..*

  • 18 years ago

    by Bill Turner

    Wonderfully written. Great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Rachel leigh

    What An Excellent Poem! You Are A Marvolous Writer, I Just Came Across One Of Your Peoms, And Well I Cant Stop Reading Them.! Your a Superior Writer And I Will Keep a Look Out For All Your New Peoms..Im Hooked.. Lol..

  • 18 years ago

    by Katryna

    I would love to find a guy like you, ur romantic and you would treat her like diamonds, you would give her anything she wants...For me Im still looking for "the one" my boyfriend dumped me today, we went out for about a year and a half, so I feel so ugly and like shit right now, but if u believe that she is out there, never stop looking for her, cuz she will coming running for you

  • 18 years ago

    by Renee

    I love how you explain what kind of woman you want, and what all she would be to you. It was an amazing poem, and you have an incredible vocabulary. Great job with this

    Take Care,
    Renee

  • 18 years ago

    by Ana Vidovic

    This was very cute! Thanks for reading my poem:) It sure sounds like you have the perfect ideal image of what you want, and thats nice. Sometimes however, what we think we want is not what we get so we get turned away. Other times, we are so blown away by a persons inner beauty that this ideal image withers away and all we're faced with is reality. Love is really like a delicate rose, if you treat it with the right nutrients it will prosper and grow. When two minds are intertwined in such a way, nothing can seperate them, and that love becomes immortal. There is someone for everyone i believe:)

    Ana*

  • 18 years ago

    by ChildofGod87

    Wow, very powerful and very beautiful! I didn't think this poem could be so deep of words:).. Well Done! Keep it up! God Bless You:)

    oxoxoxo
    -x-Sedusha-x-
    **5 all the way;)**

  • 18 years ago

    by gabs

    Wow ... im speachless that was an excellent poem like usual you did an outstanding job!! well Done... keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by robyn

    If didnt have a man i would be all that and more.... your words are sensual and seductive, beautifully written.