by Marieke Oct 23, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
A youthfull smile, but it seems so old |
by Miss Megan
Loved it...font kno y but i do....it says alot...and its wonderfully written..dont give up on writing!*rates 5* |
This is a really interesting poem. i love the repition of 'but it is', as it gives depth and meaning to each stanza. very well written. brilliant imagery. well done. keep it up. |