Monday is falling like a rainbow...

by AllHailTheHeartbreaker   Oct 23, 2005


Monday is falling like a rainbow
but we're the only ones at home
If you can't walk the line then don't
even try

Monday is falling like a rainbow
we're going places
No one ever thought we'd go
including ourelves

Monday is falling like a rainbow
and we can't take it
Anymore
our lives are so different.

Monday is falling like a rainbow
while my heart breaks
And I can't take it
anymore.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    Thought and ourselves are spelt wrong, and perhaps you should change them, and although the poem lacked a story behind it, it still had feeling. Well, had to be honest, and I did like the line "monday is falling like a rainbow"

    Good Writing!
    beth

  • 18 years ago

    by Lucy Loves Not

    There are a few spelling errors you might want to fix to provoke easier reading. I liked the message; very true.

    Keep writing,
    Christa

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